The Immortal Ones

by John F Ferrer | Science Fiction & Fantasy | This book has not been rated.
ISBN: 1451577818 Global Overview for this book
Registered by wingMelydiawing of Rockville, Maryland USA on 9/3/2010
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Journal Entry 1 by wingMelydiawing from Rockville, Maryland USA on Friday, September 3, 2010
The author gave me this to review. Looks like a cheesy fun read.

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Journal Entry 2 by wingMelydiawing at -- Geocaches, Virginia USA on Friday, September 10, 2010
Derek lives a life of horror-movie fantasies until he meets a girl at a club and those horror movie monsters turn out to be real. Overnight his life is turned upside-down. Though there is a fair bit of action, the love polygon is the backbone of the story. Werewolves love vampires; vampires love humans; humans love werewolves; it's all just a mess. There are definitely echoes of Twilight here, but with more sex and less angst. The vampire and werewolf mythos are a little different from the traditional as well. Like in Buffy the Vampire Slayer, vampires look like ordinary (though beautiful) humans until they get angry or hungry, at which point their faces "crack" and the fangs come out. Werewolves are pretty much hairy vampires: they also wolf out under stress, live forever, and drink blood. Both species can learn to keep their respective transformations under control. Both have a preference for human blood but can survive on the less tasty blood of animals. Werewolves, however, like vampire blood best of all, and are arguably the only thing (besides the sun) that can kill a vampire. (Whether or not a werewolf can be killed remains to be seen.) The other twists are more subtle: gold (not silver) hurts werewolves, and vampires (but not werewolves) are weakened by wolfsbane. (To be fair, Dracula was kept out by wolfsbane.)

Like many self-published books, this one is in desperate need of a good editor. The author clearly has a basic misunderstanding of punctuation. For most of the story I felt less like I was reading a story than having one described to me. The main characters were all fairly interchangeable in terms of personality, but I did enjoy a couple of the minor walk-ons, like Hank from the jazz club and Emma from the bookstore. I could easily see and hear them in my mind. So would I recommend this particular book? Well, no, but I do see promise in Ferrer. He has good ideas, and proper execution can be taught. I look forward to seeing what he can do with time, training, and a really good editor.

Journal Entry 3 by wingOBCZSheratonCrystalCitywing at Sheraton Crystal City Hotel in Arlington, Virginia USA on Sunday, October 10, 2010

Released 13 yrs ago (10/9/2010 UTC) at Sheraton Crystal City Hotel in Arlington, Virginia USA

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