Dark yet captivating and quite enjoyable. I didn’t get as much sense as I would have preferred of the motivational factors within the plot. I was disappointed there was not more depth. On reflection I think I was thrown because I felt the style was a but muddled.

I think in order to tell an epic tale a narrative style that sweeps across big events is used. Sort of like “The warrior, took his biggest blade, and his sturdiest horse went into battle and returned later for food”. However the plot was interesting and if I think of it as a Scottish, Brother’s Grimm tale it all comes together. Hope the next reader finds it as intriguing as I did! This would have made a good Halloween release had I though of it sooner!

Thanks for this rainbow3. It is ready to be released at my new OBCZ, just as soon as I get a reply to my e-mail asking permission to start it!

Released on Sunday, November 21, 2004 at about 1:00:00 PM BX time (GMT-06:00) Central Time (US & Canada) at OBCZ - Bayley Room at Collingwood College in durham, England United Kingdom.

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In box in Bayley Room

caught at collingwood college, will read, post journal and then pass on!