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Please Help Me Travel!!!
by Hugo Jackson | Science Fiction & Fantasy |
ISBN: 1908600225 Global Overview for this book
Registered by Greyflank of Brick, New Jersey USA on 8/2/2017
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Journal Entry 1 by Greyflank from Brick, New Jersey USA on Wednesday, August 2, 2017
I won this book on Twitter. Signed and everything! Huzzah!

Journal Entry 2 by Greyflank at Brick, New Jersey USA on Sunday, December 3, 2017
Writing any Fantasy Tetralogy is an ambitious project. You have to have an epic story, set in an epic landscape, with engaging characters with strengths and weaknesses enough to get them to and through the rough spots.

Hugo Jackson achieves most of this easily. His heroes are likable people with relatable issues and strengths. The tale is told in a G rated without being trite. The fight and battle scenes are usually nicely described and easy to follow.

In Faria's flight across Eeres, we get a lot of species diversity, but we don't get much cultural or topographic diversity. Where are the farms? Where is the livestock? Where are the wheat and rice fields? Not that I expect a travelogue, but I do like to see what our heroes are fighting for.

Our band of characters drive the plot. While I found the political structure vague (Aidan is the Emperor of a walled city?), political intrigue is rather a small focus. At this point, our heroine, doesn't need to be next in line to rule her country (empire?). It's rather more important that she's a resonator of power, as yet not realized or perfected. Her faith in her father's decisions and righteousness hardly wavers during her discoveries of his history (and especially his role in making Nazreal the mysterious legend that it is in this installment). And while she grows, and proves herself a fighter, I feel like she could have grown more.

Or rather, I wanted to see more of her thinking as growth. When we first meet Faria, she is obsessed with honing her power and doing something with it. Being a resonator makes her something of an elemental mage. She can shape things, throw bolts of lighting, etc, but her power is limited. Her power is also a secret and she's forbidden to help her people with her powers. She is frustrated.

When her home is attacked, she escapes to freedom, but also to a larger responsibility.

I'm rather surprised and pleased when Faria recognizes unrequited love between two of her friends. I'm delighted that she takes action to help bring them together, but it sort of came out of nowhere. It could have been a moment in her growth, but it feels underplayed because this romantic insight doesn't speak to her past. Was she lonely in her royal role? Was she hungry for the gossip of the servants? I know it was probably a decision by the author to keep moving forward, but I liked her enough to want more.

Speaking of wanting more; my favorite character is probably the cyborg Raccoon, Tierenan. He's very childlike and it makes me wonder how long he was part of the enemy's army, under some sort of mind control. His interactions at every level was precious... but I really wanted to know more of his tragedy. The enemy changed him... put things in his head, gave him new arms, a new ear... to improve him as a weapon and (I assuming) because he grew under their "care."

I was looking forward to seeing his reactions once they got to civilization and had a chance to look into the mirror. Tierenan was effectively raped and enslaved when he crosses Faria's path. The narrative glosses over the impact of abduction. He says that he doesn't remember anything, yet a hole in one's mind can be as terrifying as a horror haunting. For me, he's the character I have the most connection to, the character I feel the most sympathy for.

Again, probably a decision to keep moving forward. Hugo Jackson has a lot of balls in the air in this book.

There are two wolves who help Faria and Tierenan along, bonding with them almost instantly in what I might have called a "PC Glow Moment" in a pub if it hadn't been written so well. It had a feeling of destiny rather than just forced coincidence. They are good companions and make for a nice subplot that helps makes the story and other characters more grounded in the affairs of the "normal" people.

I feel like I got to know these two the best of our merry little band.

I do have two issues, and these are things are the sort of furry things that I often hit against when the author is comfortable with a multi-species setting that's relatively without intra-species strife.

The first is emotional expressions. The Gryphon, Osiris, blushes at least twice... I'm thinking his face is at least 30% beak and the rest are feathers, so how does that work? Gryphons are noted as unusual to our heroine, so it feels odd that she can read his facial emotions so well if its some sort of feather ruffling. Maybe Avians aren't so unusual, but we only see one other beakface. Anyway, it threw me out of the story a little. Might not throw out any other Furry, but I think it might throw out a regular fantasy fan.

Another problem I had was with species assumptions. While I assumed that everyone else was bipedal, I didn't make that assumption for Osiris, because I pictured... a Gryphon. That might just be me, but I'd honestly do the same thing if a Centaur, a Unicorn, snake, or a spider showed up hiding under a cloak. It didn't even occur to me that Osiris was supposed to be standing on his hind legs until I wrote some notes for this review. This didn't quite throw me out of the story, but it gave me trouble picturing some of the intense fight scenes.

Perhaps in the next installments of the Resonance Tetralogy we will learn more of the world, its politics and its peoples. Perhaps Faria will grow more. Perhaps we will learn more of Tierenan's depths. Maybe there might even be a wedding or two?

Right now, there's more than enough to draw me back for Book Two of the Resonance Tetralogy.

Journal Entry 3 by Greyflank at -- Mail or by hand-rings, RABCK, meetings --, Pennsylvania USA on Friday, March 23, 2018

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Journal Entry 4 by acetig at Greensburg, Pennsylvania USA on Saturday, April 14, 2018
A wonderful book written by a fellow furry. I'm keeping it too so it won't be traveling anywhere else.

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