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Από το βιβλίο "Φεγγαράκι μου λαμπρό φέξε μου και γλίστρησα" του Τζόμπε Κοβάτα:

Blepete, paidia, den einai dyskolo na grapsoyme ena paramythi. Arkei na paroyme dyo-treis ilithioys stin tyhi kai na toys baloyme se ena kastro i se ena dasos...

Na sas doso ena paradeigma. I Kokkinoskoyfitsa einai ena paramythi poy to katoikoyn apokleistika kai mono ilithioi. I giagia tis Kokkinoskoyfitsas zei sto dasos kai einai 95 hronon. Traba sto girokomeio, mori ilithia! Pos soy katebike, eneninta pente hronon gynaika, na zeis moni sto dasos kai na anagkazeis toys syggeneis na pigainoyne mpros piso, mpros piso, mpros piso mesa ston drymo;! Ki ystera soy lene giati o kosmos petaei ti giagia apo to treno! Einai logiko ki epomeno!!!

Ki an peis gia ti mama tis Kokkinoskoyfitsas; Alli anegkefali kai toy logoy tis. Dinei sti mikri to kalathaki kai tis leei: "Par' to kai pigaine fai sti giagia!" Poy to stelneis to koritsaki mono toy sto dasos, kyra moy; To rihneis sto stoma toy lykoy! Me to poy ftanei sto dasos, synantaei ton pio ilithio lyko stin istoria tou WWF, o opoios den tin troei, para rotaei me agonia: "Poy pas, kalo moy koritsaki;" "Sti giagia moy", apantaei ayto. Ki o lykos, anti na ti faei epi topoy, opos tha ekane kathe lykos me fysiologiko IQ, pigainei sto spiti tis giagias kai stinei olokliro senario, poy mprosta toy tyfla na 'hei kai i pio kits latinoamerikaniki sapoynopera.

Ftanei sto spitaki kai htypaei tin porta. "Tok, tok". "Poios einai;" "I Kokkinoskoyfitsa". "Perna mesa". Ki edo ehoyme tin epibebaiosi pos o egkefalos tis giagias ehei malakistei teleios: esto ki an i Kokkinoskoyfitsa ehei foni brahnokokora se krisi asthmatos, pos ginetai na min katalabei i giagia oti prokeitai gia lyko; Tote pia mpainei o lykos kai troei ti giagia. Prosekste tin kali agogi toy lykoy, poy den tha empaine pote na faei kapoion horis proigoymenos na htypisei tin porta.

Edo erhetai to aristoyrgima tis istorias. To pragmatika megalofyes: o lykos anti na stithei piso apo tin porta me ena ropalo kai na pei: "Me to poy tha erthei i pitsirika, tha tis trabikso mias ropalia sto kefali, tha ti braso ki ystera tha ti rokaniso" ooohi, file moy! Ti kanei o lykos;;;; Foraei ti nyhtikia tis giagias, to skoyfaki me ta aytia toy na bgainoyn apo eidikes koympotrypes poy ehei ftiaksei o idios (einai gnostoi deksiotehnes modistroi oi lykoi) kai honetai sto krebati.

Ftanei i Kokkinoskoyfitsa, poy oi dikoi tis anthropoi tin apokaloyn Ainstain, eksaitias toy zoiroy kai eyfyoys pneymatos tis, mpainei, koitazei ton lyko kai, anti na fonaksei to 100 i na toy pei: "Ti halia einai ayta, bre ilithie; Eheis hasei kathe ihnos aksioprepeias os lykos. Oriste katastasi, san malliari moystogria eisai", pos antidraei; Leei: "O, giagia, ti makries trihes poy eheis! Ti megala aytia! Ti megala dontia!"

Akoyste tora paidakia: opoio apo sas diathetei skylo, as dokimasei na toy kotsarei skoyfo ki ena zeygari gyalia oraseos, ki as dei an moiazei me ti giagia! Ean nai, petakste ti giagia sas apo to parathyro i paradoste ti stis arhes. Bebaia, einai alitheia pos i giagia den anagnorise ti foni toy lykoy apo ti foni tis eggonis tis, symfonoi -alla i giagia einai 95 hronon kai mporei na ehei pathei malakynsi. Omos i Kokkinoskoyfitsa pos kai den ksehorizei ti giagia tis apo enan lyko me skoyfaki;! Poion ehei gia giagia; Ton King Kong; Akomi ki an i giagia ehei na kanei halaoya apo to 1931, poia einai; O Lucio Dalla; O Bigfoot;

En pasei periptosei, telos kalo ola kala, kai o lykos tin troei! Amesos meta, gia kali mas tyhi, ftanei o kynigos, pyrobolei ton lyko kai, doksa na 'hei i Panagia, ektote agnoeitai i tyhi kai tis lykoy kai tis giagias kai tis ilithias me to kokkino skoyfi.

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Από το βιβλίο "Φεγγαράκι μου λαμπρό φέξε μου και γλίστρησα" του Τζόμπε Κοβάτα:

Blepete, paidia, den einai dyskolo na grapsoyme ena paramythi. Arkei na paroyme dyo-treis ilithioys stin tyhi kai na toys baloyme se ena kastro i se ena dasos...

Na sas doso ena paradeigma. I Kokkinoskoyfitsa einai ena paramythi poy to katoikoyn apokleistika kai mono ilithioi. I giagia tis Kokkinoskoyfitsas zei sto dasos kai einai 95 hronon. Traba sto girokomeio, mori ilithia! Pos soy katebike, eneninta pente hronon gynaika, na zeis moni sto dasos kai na anagkazeis toys syggeneis na pigainoyne mpros piso, mpros piso, mpros piso mesa ston drymo;! Ki ystera soy lene giati o kosmos petaei ti giagia apo to treno! Einai logiko ki epomeno!!!

Ki an peis gia ti mama tis Kokkinoskoyfitsas; Alli anegkefali kai toy logoy tis. Dinei sti mikri to kalathaki kai tis leei: "Par' to kai pigaine fai sti giagia!" Poy to stelneis to koritsaki mono toy sto dasos, kyra moy; To rihneis sto stoma toy lykoy! Me to poy ftanei sto dasos, synantaei ton pio ilithio lyko stin istoria tou WWF, o opoios den tin troei, para rotaei me agonia: "Poy pas, kalo moy koritsaki;" "Sti giagia moy", apantaei ayto. Ki o lykos, anti na ti faei epi topoy, opos tha ekane kathe lykos me fysiologiko IQ, pigainei sto spiti tis giagias kai stinei olokliro senario, poy mprosta toy tyfla na 'hei kai i pio kits latinoamerikaniki sapoynopera.

Ftanei sto spitaki kai htypaei tin porta. "Tok, tok". "Poios einai;" "I Kokkinoskoyfitsa". "Perna mesa". Ki edo ehoyme tin epibebaiosi pos o egkefalos tis giagias ehei malakistei teleios: esto ki an i Kokkinoskoyfitsa ehei foni brahnokokora se krisi asthmatos, pos ginetai na min katalabei i giagia oti prokeitai gia lyko; Tote pia mpainei o lykos kai troei ti giagia. Prosekste tin kali agogi toy lykoy, poy den tha empaine pote na faei kapoion horis proigoymenos na htypisei tin porta.

Edo erhetai to aristoyrgima tis istorias. To pragmatika megalofyes: o lykos anti na stithei piso apo tin porta me ena ropalo kai na pei: "Me to poy tha erthei i pitsirika, tha tis trabikso mias ropalia sto kefali, tha ti braso ki ystera tha ti rokaniso" ooohi, file moy! Ti kanei o lykos;;;; Foraei ti nyhtikia tis giagias, to skoyfaki me ta aytia toy na bgainoyn apo eidikes koympotrypes poy ehei ftiaksei o idios (einai gnostoi deksiotehnes modistroi oi lykoi) kai honetai sto krebati.

Ftanei i Kokkinoskoyfitsa, poy oi dikoi tis anthropoi tin apokaloyn Ainstain, eksaitias toy zoiroy kai eyfyoys pneymatos tis, mpainei, koitazei ton lyko kai, anti na fonaksei to 100 i na toy pei: "Ti halia einai ayta, bre ilithie; Eheis hasei kathe ihnos aksioprepeias os lykos. Oriste katastasi, san malliari moystogria eisai", pos antidraei; Leei: "O, giagia, ti makries trihes poy eheis! Ti megala aytia! Ti megala dontia!"

Akoyste tora paidakia: opoio apo sas diathetei skylo, as dokimasei na toy kotsarei skoyfo ki ena zeygari gyalia oraseos, ki as dei an moiazei me ti giagia! Ean nai, petakste ti giagia sas apo to parathyro i paradoste ti stis arhes. Bebaia, einai alitheia pos i giagia den anagnorise ti foni toy lykoy apo ti foni tis eggonis tis, symfonoi -alla i giagia einai 95 hronon kai mporei na ehei pathei malakynsi. Omos i Kokkinoskoyfitsa pos kai den ksehorizei ti giagia tis apo enan lyko me skoyfaki;! Poion ehei gia giagia; Ton King Kong; Akomi ki an i giagia ehei na kanei halaoya apo to 1931, poia einai; O Lucio Dalla; O Bigfoot;

En pasei periptosei, telos kalo ola kala, kai o lykos tin troei! Amesos meta, gia kali mas tyhi, ftanei o kynigos, pyrobolei ton lyko kai, doksa na 'hei i Panagia, ektote agnoeitai i tyhi kai tis lykoy kai tis giagias kai tis ilithias me to kokkino skoyfi.
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LOL!

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:D

Gamato!

O Kovata einai apisteutos. :)
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Υπέροχο. Το βρήκα τελειώς στην τύχη και μου άρεσε το thread.
Μου αρέσει η προσέγγισει της κοκκινοσκουφίτσας, θα τα λάβω υπόψη και μακάρι να βρώ αυτό το βιβλίο !
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Ξέρεις ποιο είναι το πρόβλημα όταν ανακαλύπτουμε τέτοια κείμενα? Ότι τα βλέπουμε κι εμεις και καθόμαστε και γελάμε σαν χαζά ενώ παρακολουθούμε παρουσιαση... Πολύ κακό....
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μπραβο κοριτσι μου που δεν παρακολουθεις την διαλεξη. Θα σε καρφωσω !
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Χαχαχαχα! Don't worry. Έτσι κι αλλιώς γελούσα μόνη μου.... Δεν θέλει και πολυ
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Πού το ξέθαψες ρε δικέ μου; Δεν θα ήθελα να μάθω πως περνάς τον ελεύθερο χρόνο σου 🙉
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ε στο διαλειμμα απο το διαβασμα χαζευα και ειδα αυτο το θεμα . Δεν μπορουσα να μην σχολιασω:Ρ

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